Merge pull request #18 from ProjectSegfault/improve-wording

Improve wording of content to be more formal

src/i18n/common.json

@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
 	"INDEX_WHAT": "What is this?",
 	"INDEX_WHO_ARE_WE": "We are 3 teenagers who have a decently powerful server. What do we do with this server? Host game servers and random assortment of privacy respecting tools like Invidious, Nextcloud, Matrix etc.... and maybe some original works. You'll see eventually!",
 	"INDEX_TELL_ME_MORE": "Tell me more! What do you guys host? Where can I contact you? Can you fix my daughter's iPad?",
-	"INDEX_MORE_INFO": "We can't fix your daughter's iPad, but there is a navigation bar at the top of the page with links to websites that explain things about us, or contain useful information about us.",
+	"INDEX_MORE_INFO": "We can't fix your daughter's iPad, but there is a navigation bar at the top of the page with links to websites and pages that explain things about us, or contain useful information about our services.",
 	"DONATE_TITLE": "Donate to Project Segfault",
-	"DONATE_DESCRIPTION": "The ways you can donate to us and more",
+	"DONATE_DESCRIPTION": "The ways you can donate to us and more.",
-	"DONATE_PLEASE_DO": "please do",
+	"DONATE_PLEASE_DO": "Reasons to donate to our project.",
-	"DONATE_EXPLANATION": "If you donate, we will be more motivated to work on the server and host more stuff and maybe even get more hardware. I really recommend you donate any spare money you have if you enjoy or use our services on a daily basis. Thanks!",
+	"DONATE_EXPLANATION": "If you donate, we will be more motivated to work on the server and host more stuff and maybe even get more hardware. We really recommend you donate any spare money you have if you enjoy or use our services on a daily basis. Thanks!",
 	"DONATE_TRANSPARENCY_1": "You can find all of our financial reports on",
 	"DONATE_TRANSPARENCY_2": "our transparency repository on GitHub",
-	"DONATE_OK_SURE": "sure I'll donate. Links?",
+	"DONATE_OK_SURE": "Donation Links",
 	"CONTACT_TITLE": "Contact Us",
 	"CONTACT_DESCRIPTION": "Do you want to contact us?",
 	"CONTACT_OUR_EMAIL": "Our email",
@@ -26,38 +26,38 @@
 	"MINECRAFT_TITLE": "Project Segfault MC",
 	"MINECRAFT_DESCRIPTION": "Yeah, we have a Minecraft server.",
 	"MINECRAFT_SMP": "We have an invite-only SMP server running on our network on version 1.18* (1.18, 1.18.1, 1.18.2) which is also bridged to Bedrock using GeyserMC.",
-	"MINECRAFT_JOIN": "If you would like to join, please join our Discord and ask us there to be whitelisted.",
+	"MINECRAFT_JOIN": "If you would like to join, please join our Matrix space or Discord server and ask a project member to whitelist your account.",
 	"MINECRAFT_DISCORD": "Invite link to our Discord",
 	"MINECRAFT_RULES": "Rules",
 	"MINECRAFT_RULE_1": "1. Do not modify buildings without permission.",
-	"MINECRAFT_RULE_2": "2. Do not bypass protections. (mining around a protected door, bypassing chest locks etc)",
+	"MINECRAFT_RULE_2": "2. Do not bypass protections. (mining around a protected door, bypassing chest locks etc.)",
-	"MINECRAFT_RULE_3": "3. Do not cheat",
+	"MINECRAFT_RULE_3": "3. Do not cheat.",
-	"MINECRAFT_RULE_4": "4. Do not lag the shit out of the server.",
+	"MINECRAFT_RULE_4": "4. Do not lag the server purposely.",
 	"MINECRAFT_IP": "IP",
-	"MINECRAFT_NOTE_1": "psst, you can join bedrock on your switch using the app we’ve linked below!",
+	"MINECRAFT_NOTE_1": "Psst, you can join bedrock on your Switch using the app we’ve linked below!",
-	"MINECRAFT_NOTE_2": "another psst, if you play on both Java and Bedrock, link your accounts together on GeyserMC’s website! Your accounts will be linked together meaning you will have the exact same experience.",
+	"MINECRAFT_NOTE_2": "Another psst, if you play on both Java and Bedrock, link your accounts together on GeyserMC’s website! Your accounts will be linked together meaning you will have the exact same experience.",
 	"MINECRAFT_LINKS": "Links",
 	"MINECRAFT_MC_IOS": "MC Server Connector for iOS",
 	"MINECRAFT_MC_ANDROID": "MC Server Connector for Android",
 	"MINECRAFT_CLIENT_SIDE_MODS": "Recommended Client-Side Mods",
-	"MINECRAFT_CLIENT_SIDE_MODS_URL": "Click me for a list of recommended client-side mods",
+	"MINECRAFT_CLIENT_SIDE_MODS_URL": "Click me for a list of recommended client-side mods.",
-	"MINECRAFT_PLUGIN_LIST_TITLE": "Plugin list",
+	"MINECRAFT_PLUGIN_LIST_TITLE": "Plugin List",
-	"MINECRAFT_PLUGIN_LIST_NOTE": "This is a manually made list of our plugins, so it might not be up to date.",
+	"MINECRAFT_PLUGIN_LIST_NOTE": "This is a manually made list of our plugins, so it might not reflect the plugins currently on the server.",
 	"MINECRAFT_MCMMO": "Click here to download our build of mcMMO.",
 	"MINECRAFT_VIAVERSION_NOTE": "You may only connect from a base version and its subversions (1.18, 1.18.1, 1.18.2). You cannot connect from a major version older or newer than the major version the server is running.",
-	"CSM_GOBACK": "Click me to go back to the Minecraft site",
+	"CSM_GOBACK": "Click me to go back to the Minecraft site.",
-	"CSM_TITLE": "Recommended mods list",
+	"CSM_TITLE": "Recommended Mods List",
-	"CSM_HOW_THEY_ARE_PICKED": "These are picked by our community or are for server features like voice chatting.",
+	"CSM_HOW_THEY_ARE_PICKED": "These are picked by our community or are required for server features like voice chatting.",
-	"CSM_NOTE_BEDROCK": "If you play on Bedrock, try to find an alternative to these. Mods like Simple Voice Chat have no alternative on Bedrock, sorry.",
+	"CSM_NOTE_BEDROCK": "These plugins only support Minecraft Java edition and most only work on the Fabric/Quilt modloaders. If you play on Bedrock or Forge mod loader, try to find an alternative to these. Mods like Simple Voice Chat have no alternative on Bedrock, sorry.",
 	"CSM_OPTIMIZATION_MODS_NOTE": "Any optimization mod (We recommend at least Sodium)",
 	"FAQ_TITLE": "Frequently Asked Questions",
 	"FAQ_OWNER_TITLE": "Who is the project owner?",
-	"FAQ_OWNER": "Orignally: Midou (Sysadmin) and Mrlerien (Hoster), but now Odyssey346 (Game Server Sysadmin, webdev and social media manager) and Devnol (Hoster) are with us.",
+	"FAQ_OWNER": "Orignally: Midou (Sysadmin) and Mrlerien (Hoster), but now Odyssey346 (Game server sys-admin, web developer and social media manager) and Devnol (Hoster) are with us.",
 	"FAQ_TOXICITY_TITLE": "One of your services contains toxic people!",
 	"FAQ_TOXICITY_1": "You can contact us by mail or Matrix and we can figure this out with you. But we recommend that you put most of these requests in our support channel at",
-	"FAQ_TOXICITY_2": "on Matrix. If it's something personal, just say that you have a report against someone on one of our  services and you'd like to be contacted by an admin and we'll constact you ASAP. We have no lives so we're quite active.",
+	"FAQ_TOXICITY_2": "on Matrix. If it's something personal, just say that you have a report against someone on one of our services and you'd like to be contacted by an admin and we'll contact you as soon as possible. We generally tend to be active throughout the day.",
 	"FAQ_TRUST_TITLE": "How can I trust your services?",
-	"FAQ_TRUST_1": "Well, you really can't. We don't make our logs or anything public, however, if you would like the data we have on you, please contact us. If you're paranoid,",
+	"FAQ_TRUST_1": "Well, you really can't. We don't make our logs or anything else public, however, if you would like access to the data we have on you, please contact us. If you're extremely privacy/security conscious,",
 	"FAQ_TRUST_2": "you are allowed to use Tor on our services",
 	"FAQ_TRUST_3": ", but we don't host any .onion links.",
 	"FAQ_CONTACT_TITLE": "Which ways do you prefer to communicate?",